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Jade Hyuuga

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PostSubject: Chakra Control Part 3   Sun May 25, 2008 5:02 pm

Jade Hyuuga walks out to the lake, admiring the strange white color, reminding him of his own odd appearance. He shrugs it off, walking to the very edge of the lake. He Activated the byakungan eyes, feeling the flows of chakra around him off things. He can see the chakra of the lake, which as the water had made, was constantly shifting, making it hard to come up with an exact amount to use.

Well, I've got to start sooner or later. He says quietly to himself. He channels chakra to his feet, keeping his eyes closed as he moves out onto the water. He takes a step onto the water, a bit wobbly, and tries to keep his own chakra level moving around at the same pace as the water, being harder than he had thought it would be. He manages a couple more steps, before he loses track of how the chakra of the water is moving and he sinks down a foot into the water, soaking him up to his knees. He quickly moves out of the water, shivering slightly.

Could have been worse I suppose. I wonder what will happen when I get out farther and mess up....I'll have to swim back or...yeah, I'll try that if it comes down to it. He thinks to himself. He channels his chakra yet again, moving out at the water's edge. He sets his foot down on it, and loses focus almost immediately, his foot sinking down before he jerks it back up. Gah, not paying enough attention. Come on Jade...you have to really focus for this if you want to beat shadow! He thinks, pumping himself up.

He shakes the water off his legs, and makes a hand seal, closing his eyes. He focuses a very precise amount of chakra to his feet, but keeps the hand seal up, using it as a focus for his chakra flow. He steps onto the water, the first step sticking right to the surface, matching the moving chakra flow of the water. He takes another step, now standing on the water again, his chakra flow melding to that of the lake and keeping him above the surface. Ripples flow away as he takes another step, barely keeping his chakra matched to the water's own. He stops for a moment, focusing his chakra hard. He accidentally pushes too much chakra, and the water bursts under his feet, shoving him off-balance and making him fall back into the shallow water.
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PostSubject: Re: Chakra Control Part 3   Sun May 25, 2008 5:03 pm

He splutters and stands up, getting out of the water and trying to shake it all off as quickly as he can. After removing most of the water, he shakes his head, closing his eyes yet again. Slow and steady, moving fast on here would take immense concentration, I'm not ready for that yet. He thinks. He puts up his hand seal and focuses his chakra as he begins walking back towards the water. He can "see" the difference in the water's chakra moving around. He watches it, and notices it is pretty much the same pattern every time.

He thinks for a moment, then moves the chakra to his feet and begins moving it in the same pattern as the water. He takes a few steps onto the water, his plan working so far. He manages to make it about six steps out, when the chakra flow of the water seems to change some. He quickly compensates and moves his chakra flow, sweat starting to bead up on his forehead. He ignores everything except the water's chakra and his own chakra. He fixes the problem and walks a few more steps onto the water, now about eight steps out from the shore, the water under him a couple feet deep.

Just as he goes to take another step, the water's chakra under his foot still on the water shifts suddenly, and he slips into the water, it soaking him past his knees this time, not quite to his waist though. He grunts and sloshes back up to the shore, walking out onto the land and shaking his legs off yet again. I know I can do this! My clan is supposed to have great chakra control, I just...I need to focus more, I need something to focus on I think. He thinks. He shakes it off and continues his training
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PostSubject: Re: Chakra Control Part 3   Sun May 25, 2008 5:04 pm

He focuses again on the lake’s chakra he activated the byakugan eye. He sits there for several minutes, just studying the water’s chakra over and over again. After the watching he sees that the chakra patterns repeat, and change as it moves out over the lake. He watches the flow a little longer, just to make sure he isn’t making some kind of mistake. He nods to himself as he finishes watching, then makes a hand seal. He focuses chakra to his feet and begins walking forward. His first foot steps on the lake with no problem. He takes another step, the water rippling out as his feet touch down.

Standing there, he makes sure to keep the chakra to his feet moving in the same pattern as the lake over and over again, making sure that he can keep it going before going any farther, starting to sweat from the continual strain of channeling chakra at this rate. He begins walking again. I can do this. I know I can do this, I just have to maintain the same pattern and focus and I’ll be fine. He thinks to himself as he continues. He takes two more steps, the water rippling and shivering as he steps down each time, the ripples moving across until they die out.

He is now about six feet from the shoreline of the lake, but keeps his eyes closed, focused only on walking on the lake and the chakra of the water. He keeps a constant flow of chakra to his feet, which shifts at the same timing as the water’s. He manages to take a few more steps, ripples out from each footstep.
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PostSubject: Re: Chakra Control Part 3   Sun May 25, 2008 5:05 pm

Sweat is covering his face now, but he ignores everything around him except the water, focused on getting farther and farther. He takes several more steps, making sure each step is going to land in the right spot and the chakra flow will be correct. He is now about fifteen feet out from the shoreline, still a long ways from the center of the island, but not giving up either way.

As he goes to take another step, the strain is too much, and his concentration slips, causing his chakra flow to cut off for a moment, messing him up. He begins slipping into the water, but to save himself from going under, without even thinking about it, he channels chakra to his hands, which causes them to stick to the top side of the lake, making him sink up to his chest, but keeping the rest of him out as he holds himself up. He pants, keeping the chakra flow to his hand going, not wanting to have to swim back.

He channels chakra back to his lower half as he begins lifting himself up slowly. He manages to get back on his feet, then he just jumps up and back to the ground. That…was…too much. I didn’t think that I could use my hands to keep afloat, it was a lot easier to stay on the water like that though since it is easier to channel chakra to my hands. He says to himself, panting heavily now, sweat running off him. He lays back on the grass, just at the edge of the water, his feet touching the edge of the water just barely. His eyes close and he dozes off, his chakra reserves now almost drained to nothing.

And Walk Back on to the Village.




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PostSubject: Re: Chakra Control Part 3   Sun May 25, 2008 6:25 pm

20,000

or

10,000

and

400

or

800

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PostSubject: Re: Chakra Control Part 3   Mon May 26, 2008 1:48 am

ill take the 20,000
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PostSubject: Re: Chakra Control Part 3   Mon May 26, 2008 6:32 pm

mkay

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